Revising Essay Rough Draft

First, I need to finish my last body paragraph on Mr. Bennett and Jane. Once I finish analyzing where they are on the 'Individual vs. Society' spectrum, I will go back and edit my thesis. My thesis needs to be refocused on the ideas I developed in my body paragraphs while writing my rough draft. As of right now, I need to make a bolden claim. At the moment, my thesis is too vague. Next, I need to go through the body paragraphs and synthesize my examples because they are also too vague. Finally, I will write my conclusion on modern day society and how it relates to the Bennet family. If I do all of this correctly, I believe I will have a solid, final draft essay.